There's this pretty little pink dress
That I used to only wear for you
It made me feel beautiful, exactly the way you do
In this dress, I was ready to give it all to you
Then the worst happened, you told me it was over
You held my heart, and it lost it's beat
I'm nothing in this pink dress without you
My heart feels weak, i'm alone in this room
The little pink dress is filled with my blood
Why go on living if the one thing you were living for is gone
Throw it all away, take one last breath
For now I can't go on wearing this little pink dress
I die here now,
becuase without you im nothing...
*Steph
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Comments
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i wonder if it's possible to have a love affair that lasts forever
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I think everyone needs to be reminded that somebody loves them... Or else... What are you living for anyway?
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Choking on nothing...screaming for something..
Sweet Deams....
Pink Kiss <3
Thanx! : )
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Choking on nothing...screaming for something..
Sweet Deams....
Pink Kiss <3
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Choking on nothing...screaming for something..
Sweet Deams....
Pink Kiss <3
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Choking on nothing...screaming for something..
Sweet Deams....
Pink Kiss <3
But it lacked something to me. Almost like a level of creativity (but not really). I like the idea behind the speakers dress but you don't really seem to run with it you simply used it as an intro. It lacked a certain poetic imagery that I personaly find to be important.
I dunno maybe I'm just full of shit... I did actualy like it but it felt like it was lacking....
( I promise I'm not a mean person... really :/ )
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Probability probably doesn't even exist.
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